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23 July 2010 @ 06:28 pm
drabble; bloom  
Tiffany/Sunny || PG || 163 words
but the unspoken words dissolved against the back of her throat.

Far off within a hidden field there were the quiet, out of rhythm thuds of bare feet against grass, and light gasps of breath in-between a duet of laughter. Hands were linked together, while the cool breeze fluttered delicately through each girl's waves of hair.

Four legs had slowly stilled within the middle of the wide open field, flowers and vibrant green grass went on for what seemed to be miles.

"Fany," the brunette breathed out, her fingers tightened around the other's hand, but the unspoken words dissolved against the back of her throat.

A set of dark, twinkling eyes and rosy cheeks had unveiled themselves from behind rich chestnut hair, and the girl pressed her body softly against the other.

Their dresses mingled, and their lips met within a shared breath. Fingers glided over goosebumps, across cheekbones, and intertwined with soft hair. There were whispered promises after broken kisses, and an ‘i love you too’ that trailed away into another kiss.

a/n; ah, my first attempt at actually posting something. i usually keep this stuff to myself, hidden within a ratty, old notebook. thank you for reading♥
there's a ray of light shining on you。: 현중。flowers。truecoloured on July 23rd, 2010 10:39 pm (UTC)
this was absolutely breathtaking. i'm sure everyone will think the same. your writing really flows and your word choice is absolutely magical. i can't wait to see more from you.
〫〰〬ミ☁: ⚡aumint on July 25th, 2010 02:02 am (UTC)
ah, i'm really glad you think so! thank you so much for reading, and such kind words. ;; ♥
cinnaminncinnaminn on July 25th, 2010 02:24 am (UTC)
this...was so amazing!!!! everything flows perfectly and it's just JJANG!!!...very very well done, hope to see more of your works here..or on soshified, if you have an account.. =]
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on July 25th, 2010 12:25 pm (UTC)
aw, thank you so much♥ i'm so glad you enjoyed it. i sadly don't have an account at soshified, though i have been thinking of making one for a while. it's silly, but forums just intimidate me for some reason x3, maybe soon!
미영이: ★수연/미영★ - smilemiyoungee on July 25th, 2010 04:20 am (UTC)
it's short and simple, but it undeniably flows very well together.
and the fact that it's 2ny too, just makes it all the more awesome. ♥
〫〰〬ミ☁: ✈aumint on July 25th, 2010 12:27 pm (UTC)
thank you♥! i'm glad you liked it, and 2ny is absolutely magical in my opinion. there isn't enough of it out there ;_;
fireapparitionfireapparition on July 25th, 2010 06:17 am (UTC)
cute! you wrote it amazingly. ^^
〫〰〬ミ☁: ✰aumint on July 25th, 2010 12:29 pm (UTC)
:3 aw, thank you♥!
grabby handssoshigasmic on July 25th, 2010 12:32 pm (UTC)
〫〰〬ミ☁: ☏aumint on July 25th, 2010 12:36 pm (UTC)
yes! high five for 2ny! and thank you for reading♥
grabby handssoshigasmic on July 25th, 2010 12:36 pm (UTC)
kekeke, write moar moar moar! :D
〫〰〬ミ☁: ♡aumint on July 25th, 2010 12:37 pm (UTC)
oh, i definitely plan on doing so! ^^
grabby handssoshigasmic on July 25th, 2010 12:38 pm (UTC)
yay OSAM!!! :P will wait for it!! kekekeeee
dimentionallydimentionally on July 25th, 2010 11:01 pm (UTC)
This made me utterly speechless. It was simply amazing. It stole my breath away with its vivid details.

Please write more.
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on July 25th, 2010 11:36 pm (UTC)
oh gosh, thank you so much! you made me blush♥ i'm really glad to hear that.

i definitely plan on doing so!
starsandramenstarsandramen on July 26th, 2010 12:56 am (UTC)
I read this and I signed up for an account just so I could comment, even though I could have done that anonymously, haha.

But this...This was simply beautiful. If someone asked me what the definition of beautiful was, I'd tell them to read this, no joke. Unbelievably breathtaking.
〫〰〬ミ☁: ♡aumint on July 26th, 2010 07:05 pm (UTC)
oh my...you just made me blush! if i could, i would frame your comment. you just made me so happy! thank you so much for taking the time to create an account just so you could comment, it means so much♥!

hopefully you will make use of your new account, and i will see you around! ^^

and again, thank you!
starsandramenstarsandramen on July 30th, 2010 01:48 am (UTC)
Haha, it's my pleasure, really.

And possibly? Your writing has inspired me, but I don't think I can write so prettily and elegantly as you do. :] :P
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on July 31st, 2010 05:03 pm (UTC)
you're too kind♥ and i am really glad to hear that! i hope you give it a shot.

thank you, again. ^^
♡☛fics r us☚♡: 유나。❤。augmenti on September 21st, 2011 06:01 am (UTC)
your first attempt? omg this is so great, i love it so much. i love how you described them, and how your writing is really subtle and leads up to the ending. it's s adorable and cute, i hope you can write more if you ever have a chance!♥
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on September 25th, 2011 01:17 am (UTC)
thank you so much ;; you're too kind. i was surprised to see a new comment on this fic actually! it's been so long since i have written, i am attempting to again, though.
♡☛fics r us☚♡: tiffany。put it back on。augmenti on September 25th, 2011 07:26 am (UTC)
i was trying to persuade you to write more, have i succeeded? :D :D :D good luck! i hope you can share something new soon :3