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12 November 2011 @ 04:05 am
drabble; palindrome  
Palindrome;
Onew/Taemin || PG || 381 words
sixty seconds is hardly a fair amount of time to wish the perfect wish.


Cheek to cheek, Taemin and Jinki laid quietly across the bed of their hotel room, feet dangled over opposite sides. Taemin shifted his weight and broke the silence. “How much longer?”

“You’re more impatient than usual.” Jinki quipped, his head tilted slightly toward the younger boy. “Just ten more seconds.”

A breath of excitement escaped Taemin’s lips, he clasped his hands tightly across his abdomen. He was like that of a kid on Christmas morning, that feeling of magic coursed through his body.

Jinki held his arm above his face and watched the second hand get closer to a new minute, and in the matter of that last second the smile he wore had grown twice as large. “11:11, make a wish.”

His voice resonated like a gun shot at the beginning of a relay race, and they each raced deep through their thoughts, wishes, and dreams. It shouldn’t have been so hard, but sixty seconds is hardly a fair amount of time to wish the perfect wish.

Forty five seconds left; Taemin rolled onto his side, his face nestled into the crook of Jinki’s neck. His brain was at warp speed, every wish he had thought of in preparation of this moment he had forgotten.

Thirty seconds left; Jinki turned to face Taemin, he scooted his body enough to see the other boy eye to eye. His brain stopped, and every wish he had stored away dissolved into thin air as if they never existed.

Ten seconds left; they each lifted their bodies enough to lean into a kiss. Smile against smile, one deep breath, and wishes were forgotten.

Five, Jinki’s fingers found their way through Taemin’s hair, four, they trailed down to the nape of his neck, three, they each leaned back slightly, two, their foreheads rested against each other, one, they each opened their eyes and glanced down at Jinki’s watch, zero.

“What did you wish for?” Jinki asked, and somehow half a minute had already gone by.

Taemin shrugged, “ Nothing.”

An incredulous look appeared on Jinki’s face, he didn’t even know how to respond to the boy that all but counted down the days and seconds to that moment.

He laid his hand over Jinki’s, “I wished for nothing because I already have what I want.”



a/n; ah, hello again! it has been a long while since i have posted here, let alone written anything. i was suddenly inspired/motivated by a friend, and this is what i produced. i hope i am finally back♥
 
 
 
♡☛fics r us☚♡: 태민。lucifer。augmenti on November 12th, 2011 09:09 am (UTC)
oh my god, oh my god, oh my god i love this so much and you know i love this so much (or you better by now akljflkjsf) screams.

i've missed your writing so much!

Five, Jinki’s fingers found their way through Taemin’s hair, four, they trailed down to the nape of his neck, three, they each leaned back slightly, two, their foreheads rested against each other, one, they each opened their eyes and glanced down at Jinki’s watch, zero.

this part, this description, everything about this entire story, ever. it's so beautiful and stunning and gorgeous and oh god, it's perfect. it's absolutely perfect ;____; ♥
〫〰〬ミ☁: ☞aumint on November 12th, 2011 09:13 am (UTC)
blushing! oh my...i always love your comments so much. i'm so glad you enjoyed it ;; i was so worried since it has been so long since i have written anything. it felt so good to create and finish this♥

i'll try and write more, i really will!

ah, crying, you're too nice! thank you for the wonderful comment (as always!) ♥
♡☛fics r us☚♡: 민호。dibidibi。augmenti on November 12th, 2011 09:15 am (UTC)
hurray! i don't want to push you into writing or anything, but your writing makes me so happy and it's so inspiring that it'd make me so happy if you did :3♥

aaaah no, you are :3 thank you! ♥
〫〰〬ミ☁: ✈aumint on November 12th, 2011 05:05 pm (UTC)
you aren't forcing me, but you are giving me that extra boost i need to actually write and finish something. thank you so much♥ i'm really glad it makes you happy, that is all i want really, for my writing to make people feel something.
♡☛fics r us☚♡: gd。dirty cash。augmenti on November 12th, 2011 09:10 am (UTC)
i can't believe it's over, i want morrrrrre


nothing soberrr
min7girl: onewglassesmin7girl on November 12th, 2011 10:08 am (UTC)
Ontae fluff of high caliber, Memories for this one!!!!
〫〰〬ミ☁: ⚡aumint on November 12th, 2011 05:02 pm (UTC)
Ah, you put it in your memories?!&heart; Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :3
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 12th, 2011 05:03 pm (UTC)
♥**
Oh, html fail and no edit button. The cruelty of free LJ.
wicked l'il flamevolatileflame on November 12th, 2011 07:45 pm (UTC)
last line made me squee X3
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 13th, 2011 02:55 pm (UTC)
xD aha~! i'm glad, thank you for reading.
ヒカリ: 이진기&이태민 - ONTAE IS REAL YOhikarinoniji on November 12th, 2011 09:32 pm (UTC)
this is so cute ;;
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 13th, 2011 02:56 pm (UTC)
i'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading&~
萨曼塔☆彡ubomb on November 12th, 2011 11:12 pm (UTC)
amazingly sweet ♥ loved it.
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 13th, 2011 02:56 pm (UTC)
;; thank you~! i'm happy you enjoyed it.
Professional Dreameranapp on November 13th, 2011 12:35 am (UTC)
so incredibly sweet ♥ thank you for sharing!
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 13th, 2011 02:57 pm (UTC)
thank you so much~! i'm glad you enjoyed it♥
Cat~♪vietcat13 on November 13th, 2011 10:58 pm (UTC)
heh random reader from tumblr here, and i never comment on fics but this was just the cutest fluff ive ever read <3 is it just me or does ontae always make me feel like ^_^ at their adorableness x3 anyway, just wanted to tell you this was very well writtenn :)
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 14th, 2011 12:53 am (UTC)
^^ i feel rather special now! thank you for taking the time to comment then, i really appreciate it♥ ah, ontae always makes me feel that way as well. they are just too adorable in real life and in fic. :3
taureau de loup: Persona 4 ☼ you're thinking arby'sbullwolf on November 15th, 2011 04:00 pm (UTC)
I am late to the party I know but this is so so so adorable and I'd forgotten how this pairing is like...my ultimate otp (hopefully I won't forget again) and yes. I love it. It's the makes-your-gut-hurt-with-happiness kind of drabble that I can't help but love.
〫〰〬ミ☁aumint on November 18th, 2011 05:38 pm (UTC)
Ah, no such thing as being late to read a fic! ^^ i too forgot for a bit just how much i adore this pairing, there is none sweeter i think. hopefully neither of us forget again, especially since there aren't that many ontae fans out there.

thank you for such a wonderful comment♥ i'm really happy you enjoyed it.